Wednesday, 26 February 2014

Script



EXT. WALK UP TO HOUSE - EVENING

One girl, HOLLY, is walking up the road to her house when her phone rings and she answers.

HOLLY
Hello… yeah alright. Let me ring you back in 5 minutes. See you.

Holly walks through gate and into her house.

INT. HOUSE - EVENING

INT. KITCHEN - EVENING

Holly goes straight into the kitchen to get some food. INTRUDER walks past window.

INT. LIVING ROOM - EVENING

Holly sits down on the sofa in the living room to eat her cake. Suddenly she hears a thud at the window and gets up to investigate. She looks out of the window to see the gate swinging shut but nobody there. She closes the curtains and sits down to carry on eating.

Holly is startled by the loud noise of the intruder trying to get through the back door. She gets up and runs into the kitchen. Panicking, she feels around for knife. Realising it has gone, she checks the kitchen for another knife, but they've all gone.

INT. HALLWAY – EVENING

Holly runs to do the front door to try and lock it, but finds the keys are gone. Instead she tries to get out, but somebody has already locked the door. She runs upstairs to hide.

INT. BEDROOM – EVENING

Holly hides under her bed in a panic. Suddenly she hears the sound of a mobile phone ringing.  

 HOLLY
Oh no, oh no… (whispering to herself)

She tries to grab her phone to turn it off, realising it is not her phone which is ringing. She tries to stay as quiet as possible, but is dragged out from under the bed by the intruder.

HOLLY
(Screams)

Shot List

  1. Establishing long shot of Holly walking up the road
  2. Medium shot of her getting her phone out
  3. Long shot of her walking through the garden gate
  4. Shaky POV long shot from intruder inside the shed, watching Holly walk to the house
  5. Medium shot of Holly walking  up to the front door
  6. Close up her unlocking the door
  7. Cut back to a medium shot of Holly opening the door
  8. Match on action medium long shot of Holly going through the door
  9. Close up her hanging the keys by the door
  10. Medium long shot of her putting down her bag and walking down the hallway
  11. Match on action of her walking into the kitchen
  12. Medium close up as she goes to grab a knife
  13. Extreme close up of her picking up a bread knife
  14. Medium shot of Holly cutting some cake, the intruder walks past the window in the background
  15. Ellipsis edit from the kitchen to the living room
  16. Medium long shot of her sitting down on the sofa
  17. Medium close up and pan as she stands up and goes to the window
  18. Holly’s POV out the window, she sees the gate swinging shut
  19. Medium shot of Holly closing the curtains
  20. Intruder’s POV looking through the gap in the curtains
  21. Close up of Holly eating her cake
  22. Extreme close up of the kitchen door handle moving, someone is trying to get in
  23. Medium tracking shot as she runs out of the room
  24. Match on action into the kitchen
  25. Medium shot of Holly checking the door and turning to look for the knife she left on the kitchen surface
  26. Extreme close up of the knife stand, no knives in it anymore
  27. Cut back to a medium shot of Holly searching the kitchen for a knife
  28. Close up inside the drawer, no knives in the drawer
  29. Cut back to a medium shot of Holly running out of the kitchen
  30. Match on action as she runs into the hall way
  31. Close up of Holly reaching for the keys to lock the door, no keys on hook
  32. Cut back to long shot of Holly at the door
  33. Close up trying to open door, it’s already been locked
  34. Cut back to long shot, intruder appears from under the stairs
  35. Close up of Holly’s feet as she runs up the stairs
  36. Match on action medium shot of her reaching the top of the stairs and running into the bedroom
  37. Match on action medium shot of her entering the room and closing the door
  38. Medium close up of her panicking and looking round the room for a place to hide
  39. Shaky, POV long shot of her scanning the room
  40. Medium shot of her running to the bed and climbing underneath
  41. Close up of her under the bed, hear a phone rig and Holly panics to find her phone
  42. Close up on phone screen to show it isn’t ringing, it must be the intruder’s phone ringing
  43. Close up of her being dragged out from under the bed

Our Thriller Synopsis


Holly, a school girl, arrives home from school to an empty house as per usual and heads straight to the kitchen for a bite to eat. But she realises this isn’t going to be a usual evening when some strange happenings begin to occur. 

She sits down to enjoy her cake and hears the sound of the garden gate closing outside. Finding it strange, but not getting too worried, she shuts the curtains and sits back down. She is suddenly disturbed again by the sound of the back door handle, as if somebody is trying to get into the house. 

She runs to the kitchen to check the door, and after recent threats from her psychopathic uncle she fears the worst and goes to grab the knife for protection. However, she finds that it is gone. She checks the kitchen for other knives to find they have all gone. In a panic, after hearing footsteps from within the house, she runs to the front door to lock it, but finds the keys missing. She decides to try and make a run for it to a neighbour’s house instead, but discovers somebody has locked the door and she cannot escape. 

Now terrified, she runs upstairs to hide, climbing under her bed and trying to keep quiet. But suddenly she hears a mobile phone ringing. Knowing this would give her position away, she panics and tries to grab her phone to turn it off. But she discovers it is not her phone ringing, and she knows the intruder must now be in the room. Praying he won’t find her, she lies as there silent, but suddenly and unexpectedly she is being dragged out from under the bed by her ankles. 

Hunted - Student Thriller Analysis


2005hunted from Hannah Boardman on Vimeo.

The opening titles are black with a white glowing outline on a black background, which immediately establishes Strauss’ ideas of binary oppositions of good and evil which are appropriate for a thriller. The text looks hand written, in a slightly serif font. They are blurry and disjointed, which connotes mystery and uncertainty.


The text indicates the names of the students involved, the film company ‘Noiré Productions’ fades in in ink blotches as if ink is spilling onto a page. The last title before the action is ‘Halogen Film’ which fades out and into the first scene.


The first shot fades into an establishing medium shot showing a young girl in bed who gasps as she wakes suddenly, connoting a nightmare or a disturbance. The chiaroscuro lighting is low key, high contrast, with the main colour standing out being pink. 


This suggests that the girl is young and innocent, which is further emphasised by her Winnie the Pooh night dress. The shot fades to a close up of a digital alarm clock which changes from 2:29 to 2:30, showing that it is the middle of the night and she shouldn’t be awake. The fact that the clock changes suggests that a planned event could be about to happen. 


We cut back to a medium long shot of the girl turning on her bedside lamp. The lamp produces a warm glow directed onto her bed, suggesting this is where she is warm and safe. This shot shows more of her bedroom, with cute teddy bears and pink fluffy pillows, emphasizing her young and innocent nature again and making her seem like the ‘princess’ character according to Propp’s theory. There is a match on action shot showing her getting out of bed, and the camera pans with her as she goes to the door. During this pan we see posters reinforcing her identity as a young teenager, and further establishing her girly character. This would cause the viewer to assume that there are adults in the house, but later events determine that this cannot be, otherwise they would surely have been awoken by the girl running around her house and the smashing glass. Another match on action shows her going out of her bedroom door, and ending on a medium shot of her turning on the landing light. 

A series of ellipsis edits leads us downstairs and into a dark room where there is an emphasized diegetic sound of a light switch as she flicks it on. The camera pans following her to the sink, and we realise that she is in the kitchen. During the close up of her pouring herself a glass of water, the lighting is used to cast a shadow to be cast over her which looks very ominous and further enhances the eerie atmosphere. 

There is a medium close up of her about to take a drink of the water, when we hear a diegetic thudding sound from upstairs as the girl suddenly looks up at the ceiling with a shocked expression. She calls out ‘Hello?’, which sounds worried but confident and indicates that she is trying not to show her fear. This shot also conforms to the rule of thirds. 

The camera pans and tracks down with her hand as she places her glass of water on the kitchen countertop. There is a close up of the glass suggesting that this has some significance to the events which will follow. At this moment tense, non-diegetic music begins. The music is sparse and sinister, played on a piano and has a fairly steady tempo suggesting something is about to be revealed. She leaves the kitchen, and as she walks down the hallway the light causes the bannister to create a shadow on the wall which looks like bars, signifying that she may be trapped. 

This is a typical thriller and Film Noire trope that we saw in one of the commercial thrillers we analysed; Sixth Sense. 

She cautiously goes up the stairs with light footsteps so as not to alert whoever or whatever is in her house. We begin to feel more tense and on edge as she gets closer to the bathroom door. This is followed by a close up of her hand pressing down on the door handle, and an enhanced diegetic creaking sound. There is a match on action edit as she enters the room. Initially this could be seen as the point of view of the intruder, but once she is inside the room we realise she is alone.

At first she stands and analyses the room, and we see her react to something which we cannot yet see. She rushes over to the sink and lifts something out of it. The camera tracks with the object as she lifts it to examine it. There is a close up of her looking at the object and we see it is red lipstick, and red has denotations of blood and connotations of death and danger. On the other hand, red can have connotations of maturity and sexuality which have previously been absent in the opening. The camera pans to follow the girl’s eye line as she spots something written on the mirror in lipstick. At this point the music begins to reach a crescendo as there is a close up of the mirror with ‘You weren’t supposed to wake up x’ written on it with the lipstick. The kiss on the end mocks her innocence and juxtaposes the threat, because usually a kiss on the end of a message would be a sign of friendship, yet the intruder is teasing and frightening the girl. There is a diegetic sound of glass smashing which leads into the non-diegetic music becoming much more tense with lots of bass sounds in it and a faster ‘chase type’ tempo. The smashing links to the idea that we are looking in a mirror. There is a medium close up of her looking startled as she hears the noise, and the camera tracks as she runs out towards the noise.

There are slight ellipsis edits leading us back downstairs. One of the shots is a close up of her legs as she rushes down the stairs. We see this from the other side of the bannister and the bars of the bannister again re-enforce the idea that she is trapped. 

She suddenly stops as she gets into the kitchen. The camera tracks down as she bends down to look at something on the ground; broken glass from the glass of water she had left on the side earlier. At this point we realise the significance of her leaving the water behind, which could connote her life being broken apart, and the shattering of her initial confidence. She closely analyses a piece of glass, and drops it suddenly when she notices the door is open. There is a medium long shot as the camera tracks up with her standing and running to shut the door. She quickly locks the door and the non-diegetic music stops abruptly, suggesting she is now safe. She leans her back against the door and sighs in relief, but still looks shook up by the experience and buries her face in her hands. The peace and silence is suddenly disrupted by the enhanced diegetic sound of the phone ringing. It is unusual that the phone is ringing now, as we are aware that it is the middle of the night. This means that we know this phone call is not going to be one from a friend or family member as they would most likely be in bed. This makes it more tense. 
  
We cut away to a close up of the phone and then back to her hand as she reluctantly goes to pick it up, before cutting back to the close up of the phone and her hand as she picks it up. There is then a close up of her holding the phone to her ear, and it is unusual that there is no voice coming from the phone, nor is she speaking. This is when we realise the intruder most have rung the phone to get her to go into that room. We cut to a close up of the girl looks very nervous and swallows hard, showing she is frightened. Her attention is suddenly diverted towards the camera and her eyes widen. This makes it look like we are seeing from the point of view of the intruder, and allows us to fully experience her fear whilst hiding the attacker’s identity. At this point the non-diegetic music begins again with high pitched strings creating tension. The lighting is chiaroscuro with a spotlight highlighting her, bringing all our focus onto her facial expression. She backs away until she reaches the wall, showing that she can’t get away any further and she is trapped. 

She sinks down the wall and drops the phone, and at this point we can again make out the shadows from the banister looking like prison bars, once again signifying her imprisonment. The camera tracks down with her, creating a high angle shot which gives the intruder more power and authority. The music reaches a climax and the screen goes black with ‘Hunted’, written in the same style as the first opening credits, in the centre. 

We cut back to the action, with a close up of the phone on the floor and the victim’s motionless hand beside it. The non-diegetic music has stopped and we can only hear the dead line sound coming from the phone. This signifies her death as the shot blurs, and leads into an ink fade transition similar to the production company name in the first set of opening credits. This particular transition could suggest the idea of death taking over the screen and taking the girl with it.  

Overall, we thought that this student thriller opening was impressive. There was sustained tension and suspense throughout, and the end of the opening scene maintained the air of mystery making you want to watch more. There were a variety of shots and edits which were done very well, especially the match on action shots, and the choice of music (when it began) was very effective in making the atmosphere tense and ominous. It was unfortunate that there was some unwanted background noise in the first few shots, and we felt that there was a lack of non-diegetic music or intentional diegetic sound. 

Written by Hannah Boardman, Hannah Cocklin and myself.

Se7en Analysis

Open Seven from Stephen Adams on Vimeo.


The film begins with an establishing medium shot fading in of a Morgan Freeman’s character, Somerset, in his kitchen. We can hear the diegetic sounds of a bustling city, such as traffic, sirens, shouting/arguments and dogs barking, slightly faded because the kitchen window is shut. This creates an atmosphere of chaos, impending danger and violence. Urban areas typically have higher crime rates than rural areas, suggesting that there is going to be some kind of crime committed. The kitchen looks neat and clean. This juxtaposes the busy sounds of the outside world, as it is very peaceful inside the house. In the foreground we can see a chess set and in the background there are some animal statues, which suggests that this man is intelligent and well-travelled.

There is then an ellipsis edit to a close up over the shoulder shot of Somerset fastening his shirt and adjusting his tie in the mirror. This shows that he is a tidy character. The lighting is very low key, low contrast, making it seem dark and dreary. The camera then tracks up so that we can see his face. He looks down at his desk and the camera cuts to a close up of numerous things on his desk – his detective’s badge, a small flip knife, a handkerchief, a pen and another item which is hard to make out. The badge indicates that Somerset works for law enforcement as a detective, and the flip knife could indicate that he lives and works in a dangerous area. The items are arranged in a neat line, and his handkerchief is neatly folded. This emphasises his neat and thorough, maybe slightly obsessive, nature. He picks each item up separately, in a very deliberate manner. As he picks up his pen we cut back to the close up and watch him slide it into his shirt pocket.

We then cut to a medium shot, where we can see Somerset from the waist down stood beside his neatly made bed, which has his suite jacket neatly laid out on it. He reaches forwards to pick something off it which is too small for us to see, emphasising his attention to detail and again his obsession with neatness. He picks up the jacket and puts it on, before moving towards his bedside table and switching off his lamp. The camera tracks with his movement.

There is an ellipsis edit to a medium shot of a room. We can still hear the diegetic city noises. The lighting is chiaroscuro, and the scene looks dark and seedy. In the centre of the frame is a man lying face down on the floor, with a pool of blood beside him. The camera tilts slowly upwards so we can see more of the man. We hear dialogue from a man which seems diegetic. He is explaining how an argument ended with two gun shots, and the man on the floor was found dead. The sudden cut from Somerset’s house to this scene makes the viewer feel tense and uncomfortable. There is a cut to a long shot of Somerset walking down the landing of a house. He is dressed in a long coat and hat, making him look like a typical detective. He walks down the landing towards the camera, and the camera tilts up slightly to keep his head in the frame. He speaks in a very calm and controlled manner. The house is very dark and shadowy and this makes the viewer feel uneasy and heightens the tension. Somerset stops to look down at something on the fridge, which the viewer cannot see. He bends down and puts on his glasses, and the camera tracks with his action. He asks if the kid saw the murder happen, which makes us assume that he is looking at a child’s drawing on the fridge, and shows that his is a caring, empathetic character. It also emphasises once again that he is very thorough in his work and checks every little detail. We can see a blurred figure in the background, and we cut to a medium shot of this figure who appears to be another detective. He laughs a little at Somerset’s comment and moves around a little in a restless manner. He says that they will be glad when they get rid of Somerset. This tells the viewer that the other detectives are not as thorough as Somerset and find his obsessive ways aggravating. We also know that this must be Detective Somerset’s last case which is often a convention of thrillers; having a last case or deadline to meet. 

We cut back to a medium shot of Somerset as he stands up from looking at the fridge. Again, the camera tracks with his action as he stands, and he removes his glasses. He continues to stare at the fridge and looks thoughtful and worried. There is another cut back to a medium shot of the other detective, who states that it isn’t there job to worry about the kid. This shows he is very focused on his work and emphasises how thorough and concerned Detective Somerset is. The man turns and walks into the room at the end of the landing, as another character comes up the stairs. We hear the enhanced diegetic sound of his footsteps just before we see him. The camera tracks down a little to allow us to see this character. The4 character walks towards the camera to a medium close up, and addresses Detective Somerset, introducing himself as Detective Mills. Detective Mills appears to be a young, keen detective, and he is new to the area. He looks much more casual than Somerset, with his leather jacket and chewing gum, showing that these are two very different characters. 

There is another ellipses edit to a medium shot of outside of the house, as the body is being stretchered out of the front door. There is a blue filter to make it appear downcast and dreary. We see that there are bars on the windows of the house, emphasising the how seedy and dangerous the area is. It could also be symbolising prison and being locked behind bars, which is what will happen to the killer. The camera tracks up and around the door a little as Mills and Somerset come out. The shot is low angle, emphasising the importance of these characters. We can still hear the city noises, but this time they are louder as the two men are outside. The rain is pathetic fallacy, and makes the area seem even more downcast and dreary. We stay on this shot as the two men converse, and then the camera begins to track backwards as the pair walk along down the pavement continuing to talk and find out more about each other. The conversation acts as narrative exposition. We discover that Mills is new in the area but has done work elsewhere and so is not new to the job. He believes he knows what he is doing however Somerset informs him that working in that area won’t be like where he has worked before. It appears that Somerset is going to be like a mentor for Mills, and he will have to rein Mills in a little, who comes across as being a confident character. They are going to have to learn to tolerate each other. We see more of the buildings on the street and lots of the windows are barred. It looks like a very miserable place. There are people walking in the opposite direction who bump into Mills and Somerset, making the action more natural. 

   We then have an ellipsis edit to Detective Somerset’s bedroom – back to where we began. It is a long shot of him sat in bed reading. The lighting remains chiaroscuro, and we still here the faint, diegetic city sounds coming from outside. But the warmer glow from his lamps makes the room look more cosy and friendly. This suggests that he needs time to relax and unwind at the end of his busy and stressful days. We cut to an extreme close up of Somerset placing his glasses down on his bedside table, and the camera tracks up with his hand as he starts his metronome. We cut to a medium shot from the end of his bed, which slowly zooms in to him. The sound of the metronome is steady and used to try and ‘fight’ the chaos and disorder. This is again addressing Somerset’s thorough nature. There is a cut to an extreme close up of the metronome, swaying steadily and calmingly. We then cut back to a close up of Somerset’s face, and we can see how he is trying to ignore the sounds of the traffic and the shouting and trying to sleep. We cut again to the shot of the metronome. 

There is a sound like thunder and the screen goes black. At this point the titles begin. They are represented in a montage, with unsettling, scratchy sounding non-diegetic music. The titles are very unsettling, with forensic images of bodies, lots of sharp objects and cutting, razors and needles implying violence and death. This is also reflected in the jerky text which looks scratched or cut into the screen. There are picture of children with their eyes crossed through, implying they have been killed. We see images of things such as tightly packed, hand sewn journals implying psychotic and obsessive behaviour. The killer seems to have a very similar obsessive nature to Detective Somerset – he is the flipside of Somerset. Both are intelligent, organised and obsessive but while Somerset is a very moral character the killer is psychotic. The colour scheme during the titles is black, white and red, representing binary oppositions, danger, blood and death.

Originally written by Hannah Cocklin, edited by myself.